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Prosze o poprawienie blędow :* i żeby to robiła osoba ktora umie po angielsku dobrze gadać i wgl, od tego zalezy moja ocena...
I prosze o szybkie odpowiedzi bo trzeba mi to na wtorek 15.01.13 lub max na środę:

We were driving a long a quiet community road just as, it was beginning to get dark. As we turned a corner then we saw an old man. He was wearing a long dark coat, black scarf and wellington boots. He was walking very fast, and then he stopped next to the lamp and... my friend Alex screamed. This strange man had blood on his coat! I felt like in a very bad horror. I wanted to drive farrer but I couldn't. Car wasn't listening to me! it was terrible. The old man was walking to us! I never felt like in this moment! The man opened car's door and sais:
-Hello, I'm Bob. I'm a mechanic, please open the mask,- It was very strange, but I do this and I get out with Ale to outside. Bob said:
-I think everything it's ok. You must haven't got oil!
-But... You have bood on your coat - said Alex
Blood? Oh... Sorry... I was in Mc Donald's. It is ketchup!
Later we took Bob home. He is older than me, but I really Like him. Now he is my friend