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Czy mógłby mi ktoś sprawdzić czy napisałam ten list poprawnie gramatycznie?? bardzo prosze..

Dear Editor,
I am writing in connection with Miley Wilson article: "Why is the Internet bad for us?" in last Thursday's newspaper. I must say I agree with many things that were mentioned by the author.
First of all, Ms Miley Wilson believes that the Internet leads to addiction. I totally agree. I can not believe how much time young people spend at the computer.Certainly a long time to spend on games on social networks can change our lives in virtual reality and addicted.
Next, she says that Internet has a bad influence on human interaction. Personally, I think that is true. When talking to someone on the internet does not see his reaction. This is very important in a conversation.
Finally, Ms Wilson says that the Internet eneourages people to break the law. In my opinion, this is a very good point. The Internet users are anonymous, therefore breaking the law with impunity feel soe.

Yours faithfully,
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jak znajdziecie jakieś błędy to poprawcie:P