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Mam na zadanie napisać "ghost story", która ma wyglądać mniej więcej tak:

One day (when?), I was in (where?). I was with (who?). It was (weather?). We were(doing what?)
We were(doing what?) when ,suddenly, we heard(what noise?).We went (where?) and we saw a (what ghost?) in (what chlothes?).It/he/she was (doing what?)
We felt (how?) and we (did what?). Then we (did what?). In the end ,we told (who?) about the ghost. They (did/didn't) believe us!

To zadanie mam na jutro -.-. Za najlepszą wypowiedź dam naj :D

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    Well it all started like this. One day last summer I was in a wood. I was with a group of friends. The weather was lovely and sunny but thick clouds were being formed in the sky. We were all picking berries. Suddenly, we heard a strange voice. It was comming from behind the bushes. We went to check what was going on. To our surprise, we saw a huge squirrel that was cutting its toenails. We felt really amrsed. We decided to help her. In the end, the squirrel got tired of looking at us and fainted. :)

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    Według mnie opowiadanie Olciaa95 jest spoko, ale ma ono kilka błędów. Poniżej zamieszczam poprawione

    It all started last summer{to tylko przykład}. One day I was in a wood. I was with my friends. The weather was really good and sun was shining but it was also cloud on the sky. We were all picking berries. Suddenly, we heard a strange voice. It was comming behind the bushes. We went to saw what it was. To our surprise, we saw a huge squirrel which was cutting its toenails. We felt really amrsed. We decided to help her. In the end, the squirrel got tired of looking at us and fainted. :)

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