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Jeżeli ktoś jest Bardzo dobrym uczniem z J.Ang. To Proszę o pomoc .! :)
Czy ten opis(Emeil) po angielsku jest dobrze napisany bez jakiś błędów .. ? Prosze o dobrą odpowiedź z góry dziękuję. :) ;

Hi.
I want write you about my great day. It was my birthday. In this day (Wednesday, two weeks ago) First I went with my parents and friends to cinema. We saw very interesting film. I think mum picked it. Then my friends said: "We must go. See you later!" and parents said that I shouldn't ask them. Then my parents invited me to pizzeria and bookshop. First we ate dinner. After it we went to shop. Parents said that I must choose books, which I the most like and... it must be several books, not only one! Oh, it was fantastic. I choosed two criminal books and one about animals from Africa. Then parents preached me go to home. When I went in, my friends left the kitchen and shouted: "Happy Birthday!". I got really many presents. Up to the evening we laughed all time and watched films. I regret that you could be there. I hope you visit me in my next birthday!